I think the fog of war idea is great, but it is incomplete when you can simply read the orders for location and builds.
Would it not be so much more mysterious and exciting to have to rely on other players for the information you need? Agreeing on moves would be completely dependent on the other player giving accurate information of his own and the intended enemies positions.
Each player can see his home turf plus any location adjacent to his units.

Please give consideration to blocking out the orders, or maybe delaying them for a game turn eg. printing spring moves in fall, as this would be a realistic way of representing uncertainty in the current decision making phase.

Any takers?